Acidic Tears [Senryu]

by Jessica   Sep 10, 2006


Diamond shaped drops fall
Black mascara quickly stains
Acidic tears scar..
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Senryu:

A Senryu has the same structure as a Haiku, (A poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5) but instead of the focus being on nature, it is on human emotions. This is usually only one stanza, but it may have more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Layla

    Very nicely done. I like the creativity of a different type of poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    For some odd reason. I am in love with this poem! It is beautiful, yet sad in its own little way. It was well written and I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah i really like it. I love the topic and your words are really well put together. Great job girl =] Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I love this poem. It was great how you used such emotional and desciptive words in such a short poem. Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Superb word choice with a touch of good imaginery..

    Good Bless!

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