Good job, it was short but effective!

This is nice and very clear!

Jessy, I loved this poem, very emotional. well done

Superb word choice with a touch of good imaginery..

Good Bless!

I love this poem. It was great how you used such emotional and desciptive words in such a short poem. Good job

Woah i really like it. I love the topic and your words are really well put together. Great job girl =] Keep it up!

For some odd reason. I am in love with this poem! It is beautiful, yet sad in its own little way. It was well written and I loved it.

Very nicely done. I like the creativity of a different type of poem.