by BlueDreams
Angie dear, what a beautiful sad penned you potray here, flowed well with beautiful emotions, i hope everything well with you myfriend, hugs...take care. |
by Simon Hayes
Sadness so clearly displayed in this piece! Diana is right... Souls heal, clouds clear and one day you'll look back and smile. The only way is up. Great piece. |
by Eibutsina
Although this poem is simplistic its also deep and very thought provoking. I related to it well, it took me to a place I havent been in a long time...its beautifully written, sad yet conveying a sense of hope at the same time...it feels a like there should be more to it though Angela...like I was hanging on for more...besides that another great write from you :o) |
by JL
Beautiful poem Ang! I miss you, I haven't been able to get on the computer much. I'm glad Peter's doing okay, I hope you are too. Take care, and I'll miss you a ton if you leave. *hugs* XXXXX |
by Richard S
How true it is that we are drawn to certain people who radiate that certain glow and yet do we take the time to see what lies behind the smile. Is there some hidden pain that we may help with. |
by Jason
Aside from the "little girl lost" part I can really empathize with this piece. It is very emotional all the way through. |
by dora
Angela Ive been reading ur last few poems theyve been great. this was really touching. xx |
Wow, this piece is so touching. I can relate to it. You wrote it greatly, every stanza has heartbreaking imagery and excellently described emotions. Whole piece has stunning atmosphere yet it's filled with sadness. |
by Baby Rainbow
This is a poem that kind of describes how I feel a lot. It shows the bravery of the mask which this character has put on for other people's benefit. This can work for a while, it often does, but eventually it comes down and you can't keep it up any longer. |