Comments : Broken heart

  • 18 years ago

    by waking up inside

    Try the words.. that never had meant anything at the end of the last stance. it flows better.

    I like ur poems holly and I'm almost certain I kno who its abt. but hey it's life. I love you to death girl.. we have had our bump in the road but eventually we'll get married.. :p hahaha

    keep up the good work hun :]

  • 17 years ago

    by waking up inside

    But promises are empty.

    i kno all abt that.