Ooooo, i like it, burn!! lol i love this poem, some guys just need to back off and get the hint lol, man i wish i didnt like my boyfriend lol i love this poem and i love how you used your words in it, it really paints a picture in my mind, anyways keep up the good work and come check out some of my poems i think youll like the newer ones the best.
XOXOX
Kamille