Alone {Cinquain}

by Natalie   Sep 10, 2006


...................Stained tears,
................From perfect eyes,
.............Can never hide the truth,
.....That she's simply crying for help,
.........................Alone.

11th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that
consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4,
6, 8, 2 lines.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Neeki I love this poem because I can relate to it and I am not lying. I know what it's like to cry for help but be alone.

    You write so beautifully with haunted words that stand out.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great job, they all said their feelings about it that is why i think no word left for me to describe this wonderful poem with, once again one of the best job.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job. Are they still downvoting you..%$&* them! Keep your head up girl!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow, very emotional. keep writing5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This type of poem seems to be very popular on the site right now, but it is also difficult to do. I enjoyed reading yours because it was written well and showed you ablity to shape and control language. A new poem hun.

    -Tainted Miko

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