Star[[Shape Poetry]]

by Catastrophic Beauty   Sep 10, 2006


JUST WANTED T0 TRY S0METHiNG NEW
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----------------------It
---------------------can
-----------------grant your
-wish and it can give you supreme bliss.
---It can blind you with its brightness,
---------and lure you with its glitz.
------------It falls from the skies
--------------brings joy to your
------------teary eyes----then it
-----------wipes--------------away
----------your------------------cries.

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Shape poetry, poems take on the shape of its subject. Therefore, if the subject of your poem were of a flower, then the poem would be shaped like a flower. If it were of a fish, then the poem would take on the shape of a fish.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, lol, wow! That was cool, I have never seen a poem like that before.. Very amusing and creative! The descripitons had lovely imagery as well, very nicely done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Holy.. wow. I don't think I have EVER seen anything like that on this site, that's really awesome.

    Considering the fact that each line had to be so limited, I was kind of surprised you managed to get it to rhyme at all. The only possible thing I could suggest would be to change 'sky' to 'skies', but even that would probably just make a mess of the star instead of helping any.

    This is talent, it's seriously impressive.

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS iS SO CUTE! i LOVE HOW iT`S iN THE STAR SHAPE;; REALLY UNiQUE!

    -SHELBY-

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