THiS iS SO CUTE! i LOVE HOW iT`S iN THE STAR SHAPE;; REALLY UNiQUE!

-SHELBY-

Holy.. wow. I don't think I have EVER seen anything like that on this site, that's really awesome.

Considering the fact that each line had to be so limited, I was kind of surprised you managed to get it to rhyme at all. The only possible thing I could suggest would be to change 'sky' to 'skies', but even that would probably just make a mess of the star instead of helping any.

This is talent, it's seriously impressive.

Awh, lol, wow! That was cool, I have never seen a poem like that before.. Very amusing and creative! The descripitons had lovely imagery as well, very nicely done! 5/5