Let Me

by Esther   Sep 10, 2006


I'm crying,
and I'm dieing
Let me shorten my wait,
For this terrible fate,

Let me take the knife,
And with it shorten my life,
Let me shorten my wait,
For this terrible fate,

Let me take the knife,
To shorten my strife,
With it make two long slits,
Rite along my wrists!

What is the point in explaining?
The only comfort i find is my quick decease of exhaling
And with this final breath
I say my last goodbyes!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I have no words accpet "WOW!" I love this poem so full of darkness. Great Work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Haha. I'm so easily pleased.
    I love dark poems.
    Yours are amazingly well done.
    Least to me they are.
    :]]]

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow I'm cryin,
    ((I really, really dislike this line...))

    But other wise, I loved it. You can just -feel- your emotion in it...It's amazing. I loved it up until the end. And I love how you kept repeating yourself..Nice touch. It was perfect for the poem.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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