Wow I'm cryin,
((I really, really dislike this line...))

But other wise, I loved it. You can just -feel- your emotion in it...It's amazing. I loved it up until the end. And I love how you kept repeating yourself..Nice touch. It was perfect for the poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Haha. I'm so easily pleased.
I love dark poems.
Yours are amazingly well done.
Least to me they are.
:]]]

Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I have no words accpet "WOW!" I love this poem so full of darkness. Great Work.