Comments : Friends

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Inside of us we all have a heart,
    Each one different to set us apart,

    I love these two lines. Confusing yet meaningful. Very nice.

    Also, the 'friends down the side' thing works surprisingly well. Usually when that technique is tried you can tell they used specific words to get it to work, but in this one it all works well.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Mmmmm.
    antoher good poem.
    Hehe.
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