How long will i count the days that you are gone

by Silent Screams   Sep 10, 2006


PLEASE DON'T VOTE FOR MY POEMS IF YOU ARE GOING TO VOTE 1!!!!!!!just tell me what i did wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The blood squirts from my veins I'm screaming out in pain...
but i have to do this
to know what you went through
i have to slit my wrists
to feel your pain
because it's the only thing
i have left of you..
i need it
so i won't go insane
you are in my heart
you own it on it all because your the one i love
most of all...
i need you here,
i need you now
for i am falling way to fast i just can't get rid of my past
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i know that this is a really short poem but I've cried so much tonight and this is all that would come out. into words the rest wouldn't make any sense if i put it down on here....please vote/comment on my poem I'll return the favor thanks so much
oh and this is another poem for my best best best best friend RIP
b i love you sooooooo much
auna

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chris W.

    Very good. im sorry for your loss. sometimes a short poem is all thats needed to get the point or emotion across. and you did it. again i am sorry for your loss.
    p.s.: i appreciate all your comments on my work. it means a lot to me. it seems like you have read and commented on all of them. i will try to return the favor but i am very busy with full time college and work! im an english major so i am constantly reading and reading and reading....lol. i will try to comment on your work as much as possible. again thank you for your comments.

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Hi Sweetie, This poem is filled with raw emotion Stay strong think good thoughts I`m thinking of you.

  • 18 years ago

    by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ

    You arre really good

    peacea

    -ten year old poet
    -DEVIN!

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