You arre really good

peacea

-ten year old poet
-DEVIN!

Hi Sweetie, This poem is filled with raw emotion Stay strong think good thoughts I`m thinking of you.

Very good. im sorry for your loss. sometimes a short poem is all thats needed to get the point or emotion across. and you did it. again i am sorry for your loss.
p.s.: i appreciate all your comments on my work. it means a lot to me. it seems like you have read and commented on all of them. i will try to return the favor but i am very busy with full time college and work! im an english major so i am constantly reading and reading and reading....lol. i will try to comment on your work as much as possible. again thank you for your comments.