Awe.. wow. This is short, but completely brilliant. I loved it and there's nothing more to say. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Short and to the point. Very nice. The first stanza is kind of weak, but the second is very powerful and makes up for it. 5/5

You are so great in how u express ur true feelings, i like ur all poems

For such a short poem, you did an amazing job. Deciet is painful. Keep up the great work. =]

Wow!! such a short sharp poem... yet so strong and meaningful!!
well done keep writing!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Short and to the point...this is a good poem. very well written
good job

Short and sweet, Some of the best, I think. Nicely done.

Amazing! I love it!! Its short but its good! really good! Keep writing! xx

Aww Wow..

Good Job Love..
This was Very MeaningFul.. thank you.

XoxO..

Awesome poem! Alot of emotion here--- My only suggestion is to change the last line. I look forward to more poems like this one!

xxEvilAngelxx

Excellent work
good start... u shud write more...
nice rhymes...

pls vote & comment on
dear sir
murder or suicide

thanks
love
amy

This poem is so short but it's right to the point and it's so true excellent job 5/5

I loved this!
So short, but again so much meanign and emotion.

Short, but well written! Good one!

This is a powerful poem.... with alot of emotion, I just wish it was longer, to give me more of an idea of why you feel this way, what made you feel this way... just something more to paint a larger picture for me... Cause I feel I'm not getting enough information=( but of course that maybe the point your going through, I dont know. It was really good for what was here lol=) So keep it up=D

Damn! i can soo relate to that!! its amazing!!

short yet powerful..and full of meaning !

5/5

Very sad i like it

Yeah..I kno right..but I am shy..lol

It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?

It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?