Oh My Goodness!!! I love this. In so few lines it pulls out so many emotions and feeling. I love it. I can totally relate to this also. I can really feel the pain and frustrations within these words. Great Job!!!!

Very strong poem. It is concise which keeps the emotions lingering inside the reader. The first stanza set a perfect tone for what was to come. Loved it. the line 'you took my soul' is pretty haunting.
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