This is a really good poem.
I really love some of the imagry you've used here.

Can I ask what was going through your head when you wrote it?

Thanx

saraphene.
x x x x x x

Hay there shadows within!

(deep name by the way)

Thanx for getting back to me, most people just egnore the comment you make and I'm always asking questions so it's nice to actually get a repply!

I understand what you mean about being able to shout and peole not hearing. I'm one of those who shout alot so to speak but I am also one of those who listen.

Coment about "him" duly noted,
I whote that one when I was In a bit of a state so now I go back and look It Does need a bit of explaining.
I've tried to explain it all in the poem I just wrote calld "HIM".
If you want to know more then just let me know, I think Iv'e got my private message set up, so If you wanna talk about poetry or any thing at all just let me know! You seem like a pritty down to earth person, I may be wrong but theres only one way to find out and no one is so rich they can turn down a friend.
thanx again
saraphene.
x x x x x x

Hay there shadows within!

(deep name by the way)

Thanx for getting back to me, most people just egnore the comment you make and I'm always asking questions so it's nice to actually get a repply!

I understand what you mean about being able to shout and peole not hearing. I'm one of those who shout alot so to speak but I am also one of those who listen.

Coment about "him" duly noted,
I whote that one when I was In a bit of a state so now I go back and look It Does need a bit of explaining.
I've tried to explain it all in the poem I just wrote calld "HIM".
If you want to know more then just let me know, I think Iv'e got my private message set up, so If you wanna talk about poetry or any thing at all just let me know! You seem like a pritty down to earth person, I may be wrong but theres only one way to find out and no one is so rich they can turn down a friend.
thanx again
saraphene.
x x x x x x