by Todd
So true!:P |
by Esther
I like it at the mo but if you want ways to improve you could get rid of the so at the beggining of the so tell me's! and on the 'Until they get their fill' you could put Taking more than their fill instead or some-thing like that! I'd love to tell you how to improve it more but best not for fear of hurting your feelings! |
by Esther
I like it at the mo but if you want ways to improve you could get rid of the so at the beggining of the so tell me's! and on the 'Until they get their fill' you could put Taking more than their fill instead or some-thing like that! I'd love to tell you how to improve it more but best not for fear of hurting your feelings! |
by amandaa
Honestly, I think it's really really good....I think like this too, and have asked these questions before as well... |