Comments : Slain

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Hey if you like this poem then plz feel free to read, rate and comment on my others! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*TDG*~

    Yah i liked this poem. its real good. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. I loved the repetition! The rhyming was great and the poem flowed very nicely as well. Keep it up!

    && thanks for the comment