Soildiers Play.

by Esther   Sep 10, 2006


As I'm looking at the sky,
I start wondering why?
The stars are going past,
They're really going fast,

I don't get it at all,
I look at the wall,
Where on it some-ones written,
And left an apple which has been bitten,

What has been wrote is this
And I'm not taking the p***

An innocent victim was killed during soilders play,
A game, a game, just a deadly game.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Nice dark poem love.
    It was short and rhymed lovely.
    ;]

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I liked this but I'm not sure if I got the message... Is this like a war, and your laying on the battlefield dying... you thought it was a game... and now its gone too far... im not quite sure... the apple bitten was that like poison ... i think for a titles... :
    Game Too Far
    Poisoned Life
    Soilders Play...

    anyways this made me think of like a future poem i might write so... i give you a 5/5 :) great job

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