by Esther Sep 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
The sound of bells, |
Wow.....thts all i can say....it makes me scared sorta... |
Interesting |
by BlueDreams
Another beautiful penned you potray here, illusion yet beautiful emotions... |
by Dana
Hmmm interesting. I loved the whole repetition. I liked the whole idea..but I think you can expand more on your words. I just seemed unfinished...but none the less still great!!! Just a minor suggestion...you definatly don't have to listen to me at all! It was a great poem! 5/5 |
by donna
A very well written poem.. well done 5/5 xx |