Finally {Pleiades}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 10, 2006


Finally he saw their nightmares were his dreams,
Fire setting through his veins so bright,
Flowing freely against a midnight sky,
Forgotten are his dreams, he'll steal a nightmare instead,
For this is what the Sandman does.
Finite lines keep him away from the world;
Finally he'll take away your nightmares.

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A Pleiades is a poem where only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must begin with the same letter as the word in the title.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Interesting. Very interesting. You are a unique writter Shin, I love that about you! Nice work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol, the sandman! =P Tehee, sorry, back to the poem.. It was great, it flowed well, and I love the Pleiades format.. The descriptions were very detailed and full of imagery and the poem had an eery feel to it! Nicely done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    For a short poem, its very expressive...it had a nice vibe to it, it was one of those poems you just enjoy reading over and over...i probably read it about 5 times..lol...anyways 5/5...good work:):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by a great poet. I really do enjoy reading your poems as you know how to write your true feelings. another 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I've missed reading your work so much! This is another example of how great of a poet you are. Very unique type of poem; I enjoyed it. You definately packed a lot of intensity into only seven lines---- Keep it up, hun!! 5/5

    =D

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