Excellent....This poem reminds me of
another great poet that I\'ve read.
Emmily D, The words are not
words she would use. But you do have
some of her style. Believe me hun
when I tell you that your on your way
to being one of the best. There are a
few things that you might need to
work on, but you\'ll get soon. Again I
say excellent work, and keep it up.

Love
Letty