Comments : Toilet Surprise

  • 18 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Aww i liked it nice job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Lol.. This is very humourous.. I really liked it, and it is so true.. ahh, where would we be without children!!??

    Btw, I do understand your comment, that you made.. I too come from a broken home from a mistress, and have a younger brother because of it.. Unfortunately, we cannot help who we fall in love with.. but I hope this will not deter you from enjoying my poems..

    Well done with all of yours, they are incredible. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Hehe, this poem brought back memories.. so glad they have grown out of that now.. great work, well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Randomness

    I loved this! 5/5 then again i used to purposely flush stuff down the toilet like my moms cell phone once and then another time it was her keys quite funny though!

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabelle

    This is so funny!! I luv it