Wow, that was very powerful..my family is pretty messed to if you ever want to talk add me aunabeth@hotmail.com.. this poem has alot of powerful feelings like your other one's but this one hits me harder...well done you just keep getting better and better..i knew you would by the time your my age your going to be the best in the world at the rate your going at..just keep it up and read through your poems for spelling mistakes...i forget to do that sometimes to but omg this poem was amazing keep it up never stop:) |