Very nice *claps* beautiful in all its entirety. once again, a masterpiece. love ya Em. xoxox
-Suz

Wow I really like this one! great job!
*5/5*
MandiexOx

Very nicely done. :]

The flow was great in this. I loved it. Wouldn't change a thing either. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

The first time I read this I was like "not bad" The second time I read this I thought "good style and content". The third time I read it [actually, my daughter read it to me] I was floored. The things I was missing the first two times I read it was suddenly revealed. Very profound imagery. Loved this. Just a bit of dark poetry around the edges which I loved. An excellent job. Thanks for entering it in my contest. Will look forward to reading more of your work.

Very creative. I loved it. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

I love this poem, it definately has to be one of my favourites, keep up the good work!

WOW!!! I don't even know what to say, this is so amazing!!!! I can't believe it.....

i love the wording and how it starts really sad and just completely changes, amazing write.

xx love sammi xx

And little choppy but nicely ended!

Gerat flow.....very impressive!

A good poem and an even better message. I liked the way you wrote in this poem...it was less abstract. Anyway, good work love.

Brad

P.S. I hope you know that it was one of your comments that made me stop writing. On 'Life in the Capital' you wrote that something was lacking in my poems. That then caused me to have an even bigger complex about my writing...and so I couldn't write for months. But don't let that stop you telling the truth. The truth is much better than the lie...in the way of poems, lol.