by Sweet lig Sep 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No wonder, im missing you now |
by Katie
Oh, this poem is so sweetly sad. It really made me think of losing one of my own brothers. I really like it, even though it saddened me. Good job! |
Just remember he will always be proud of you and he will always be in your heart! |
Very deep and well written! The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was deep. Although, it did seem a little repetitive... 5/5 |
by fakesmile
Astig itong tula mu.. anyone can really relate to this poem.. dahil halos lahat tayo namatayan na.. wow! i seriously think you are an amazing poet.. 5/5 idol kita!! |
by Erica
Sorry about ur loss, niicely written.5/5 |