Dont Judge

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Sep 11, 2006


Don't judge by appearances
Cause there probably fake
Smiles are probably just a mask
From when the pain was too much to take

Don't be fooled by the laughter
It's just to cover the cries
Another face to hide behind
Instead of saying goodbye

Don't think you really know her
Don't even try to make her stay
Packing up what is importent
Leaving and running away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Beautiful poem.
    The emotions/thoughts are just great.

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. The theme was clear and the emotions real.

    -there...should be "they're
    -Change the e to a in Important
    -the last line of the first stanza doesn't flow as well...get rid of the "from"
    -Try removing "even" in the last stanza.

    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Hey thanks for the comment. I really like this poem.
    ~DyingBlackRose~

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    I really like this poem good work xoxoo love georgia

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