What I Had

by *Daniel94*   Sep 11, 2006


I did not know what I had
until one day it was gone
and now I am so very sad
and feel so badly torn

so if I was the best I could be
and if I tidied up my act
would you then come back to me
so we could make another pact.

.........

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my...daniel, what a lovely penned, though 2stanza but well expressive emotions....well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very nice poem , i really think you have a knack for writing, =]

    keep up the good work.

    5|5 for the sweety.

    x.x:Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by leticia miller

    This was good and yes i am a girl lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Cameron

    I really like the way you write will you check me out sometimes thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Very very beautiful...=]

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