Your words brought tears to my eyes. honestly, the futility of war is felt and repented by so many around the world. And yet, time and again, it is the innocent that are pawned in this fight for more glory.

i hope all this stops, before it's too late

peace and prayers
shobhana

Wow, i really liked this. both sections - they seemed like two independent but related poems. the first part is excellent, and the second flows well and is sophisticated. you capitalized "It" a few times that you didn't need to, but that's just a small thing that's easily fixed. (unless you intended that?) anyways, good job