Amazing writing. i loved the style of it. i liked your flow with the words. however, at the end it seems a bit wordy, other than that beautifully written 5.5

Awwww SO good! It,s really touching...great job -xxxx-

This is a good poem, it seemed optomistic and pessimistic at the same time.. maybe i was missing sarcasum or something, but this poem really made me stop and think, which i liked

Dunno why i'm the last one to comment your poems but that was really Superb poem...and Keep the good job up..

Jay

I know exactly how you feel... i hav that kind of so called 'friend' but never keep in contact..

Tomorrow I'll be alright,
With or without you,
I wouldn't die, cause my friend,
You're dead in my heart..

this stanza just made me feel better. you should always believe you can make new friends.. :)