Damn i am addin you to my favorties for that if i havent already i am goin through that exact stuff right now so yea i love that poem!

Another excellent poem made by u, 5/5

Oh that was such a good poem, it showed trials and tribulations that couple's go through in a relationship.

There's a good element of repitition in this one, which makes the final triplet more powerful than if it was just free verse. I had a suggestion, though. You could make the rhythym better by replacing the final "you told me" in each stanza with another, shorter phrase, one that matches the syllables in the rest of the lines better. Good job, 5/5.

Awesome poem! I love the repitition of "you told me" and how it stops at the end and changes to "now I'm telling you" The flow could be slightly adjusted in a couple places, but otherwise, excellent job!

xxEvilAngelxx