She's Still Trying

by Sarah Ann   Sep 11, 2006


Frustrated, complicated, nothing makes sense
Squirming and sweating; her body seems tense
So many loud noises drumming her ears
Some may have wondered why she is still here

This story tells not of the girl who walked away
She is one so prestigious and strives on each day
One who looks past all her hopeless fears
It isn't so easy, for with it comes tears

And everyone seems fooled, by her perfect smile
Each victim to this girl's unintentional guile
Ironically she cries a bloody river and sea
Look forth for she's still trying! and that one girl is me

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Darling, this is a beautiful poem.

    I can relate to it...I know that everyone says that but I really truly can!

    keep up the great writing and if you ever need to talk, email me x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiaria

    For once i see someone understand. why is it that when beauty is present, deppression is assumed so far away. i feel those everyone sees as perfect, are the true hurt. for we are the ones who must follow the rules, guidline, restrictions, and laws. we are the judged; judges however. ironic.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiaria

    For once i see someone understand. why is it that when beauty is present, deppression is assumed so far away. i feel those everyone sees as perfect, are the true hurt. for we are the ones who must follow the rules, guidline, restrictions, and laws. we are the judged; judges however. ironic.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. the world is mean. u're alone there. it's deep in emotions. got a gr8 flow. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    Great poem. it so deep. i loved the surprise ending

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