Great poem. it so deep. i loved the surprise ending

Gr8 poem. the world is mean. u're alone there. it's deep in emotions. got a gr8 flow. keep writing:)

For once i see someone understand. why is it that when beauty is present, deppression is assumed so far away. i feel those everyone sees as perfect, are the true hurt. for we are the ones who must follow the rules, guidline, restrictions, and laws. we are the judged; judges however. ironic.

For once i see someone understand. why is it that when beauty is present, deppression is assumed so far away. i feel those everyone sees as perfect, are the true hurt. for we are the ones who must follow the rules, guidline, restrictions, and laws. we are the judged; judges however. ironic.

Darling, this is a beautiful poem.

I can relate to it...I know that everyone says that but I really truly can!

keep up the great writing and if you ever need to talk, email me x x x