by Midnight Sun Sep 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
*I know it's long but I promise it's good...so please read and comment, thanks! : ) |
Sad but true in these trying times of war. Very heartfelt. Didn't mind the length at all. Flow was good and the message one that has been passed down and felt by all. |
by BlueDreams
Beautifu poem yet so inspiration written, flowed well yet well ended! beautiful done, thanks for sharing your poetry and your nice comment on mystuff, i very appreciated! best wishes. |
by *Charisma*
Beautifully written. i think i know your inspiration ;) it's said when we lose someone we love, but to know it's a losing battle they died for is an even greater hurt. Jpoet* |