This is very deep and emotional.It captures the details and views of real life.It has a truth and sicerity and sadness that only reaches deeper with each reading.Excellent.

GaryJ

Great job. i'm glad to see you still write. thanks for the comment. 5/5

This is very touching and heartfelt.I sense the tragedy yet the hope.You have beautifully expressed both.Good images, metaphors, flow, word usage and emotion.Great ending.I feel this.

Gary Jurechka

Wow this poem is so touching...i loved it so much!! ur an excellent writer and thank you so much for your comment on my page it meant alot
Luv DarkCookie xoxo

Beautiful and sad. Nicely expressed. Thank you for the nice comment on mine. It really helped, and meant a lot to me that someone actually wrote something back. Again, this is a wonderful piece of work. Very touching. A nice read. 5/5

Kind Regards,
Luna

Wow.... i mean WOW!!
that is such an amazing poem.

i honestly dont think the title needs changing, i like it anyway!

The rhyming was good, but the flow was abit broken up.

i liked reading this and i hope to see more like it from you!

~Murder. 5/5

WOW!!!! this is so sad, yuor rhyming and flow is nearly perfect. As for a name, i've got no idea, the one you have now is goodd though. Well Done amazing poem, 5/5
~She Died Screaming

I really enjoyed this poem. It was so sad though. *Wipes the tear that strayed from my eyes*

A beautiful and deep poem. it flows exceptionally well. such feeling. again beautiful

An excellent write about a very sad experience, lives can be changed in an instant very well done .........MADD

Excellent piece....perfect just the way it is!

Wow! I had no idea you were so great. You have an amazing perspective on things. Great job once again and I'm looking forward to the next one!
~Midnight Sun

I've never been brought to tears by a poem.
yours was the only exception.
very well done. you must know that feling to have been able to write about it so well.
as for the title i like it very much. it . . .Fits
again well written and good job
5/5 all the way
Sam Mayo

Deep and quite touching..

I like the title btw, and it was very deep, it made me reread it, to look beyond what it said. It was very touching, i agree. Keep up the great work!