by Seronum
Very good poem, and may i add the pretty picture of you on your profile. 5 up! i know these poems usually mean depressionso if you need anyone to talk to you can talk to me, if you notice alot of my poems are depressing. ttyl |
by blueknight
Wow great piece i feel the love of a friend in this one a true feelings for a rue friend the words you used are great the flow was awesome over all great piece great job 5 from me |
by Layla
Excellent poem! I really loved it. |
by Goran Rahim
A very great poem as i can relate, i been through this in my past. thank you for sharing, 5/5 from me. |
by Misstress
Rhythm and Rhyme are carefully allied. |
by donna
Such a sweet poem, and so beautifully written.. the rhythmn was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx |
by Jessica
Awwhh, Nelle that was so adorable.. It was full of love.. THe descriptions were beautiful and the flow worked well.. Very cute indeed, I loved it! Nicely done sweeetie! 5/5 |
by Kyra
Hey great poem i liked it. |
by Esther
I like this poem, lots it is kinda emotional! |