Hello

by meryeva   Sep 12, 2006


Hello
I'm sick today
my hairs a mess
and i cant get my smile to stay
I'm tired tonight
I'm afraid i wont make it through
I'm full of fright
I'm UN happy tomorrow
i know it will go away
just like every other day
......but I'm still afraid

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  • 18 years ago

    by Love Panda

    ....im confused. from start to finish i was confused to, you need to open up abit more, explore the possibilities of all kinds of words that describe how you feel..stick to one thing, i felt your poem was scattered..sorry..

    ...ive read and commented on your other 2 poems, i think you have the makings of a great writter, you just need to get more experiance in writting-writting alot more!

    october xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Every one gets afraid at one time or another. Its how you deal with it that counts. This poem is a grate way ..

    Keep writing L

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