Every one gets afraid at one time or another. Its how you deal with it that counts. This poem is a grate way ..

Keep writing L

....im confused. from start to finish i was confused to, you need to open up abit more, explore the possibilities of all kinds of words that describe how you feel..stick to one thing, i felt your poem was scattered..sorry..

...ive read and commented on your other 2 poems, i think you have the makings of a great writter, you just need to get more experiance in writting-writting alot more!

october xx