Pain

by meryeva   Sep 12, 2006


Every night she crys over him
every time she sees him she wants to kick him scream at him
but most of all she just wants to love him
no song can describe the pain i....she feels inside
she trys to cover it up not they any one notices
she begs god please god please i know hes the one for me just tell me why wont she let us be please god please tell him to take care of me
show him what i can be..please god........please

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is like a prayer full of love

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that this poem is very good. Keep up the good work. This poem is only to true in so many cases.

  • 18 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow- i liked the bit were you changed your mind and said she...

    "no song can describe the pain i....she feels inside"

    i dont think i have seen any one else do that before...good job

    october xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awww we do kinda feel the same way....it sucks:(...not the poem but having those kindas of feelings...the poem was reallly really good5/5
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Well as a poem it is ok.. stuck on a guy you are young yet. I know how it was for me back then. and i know every one is different. I also know we all grow in time so I wish you luck

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