Well as a poem it is ok.. stuck on a guy you are young yet. I know how it was for me back then. and i know every one is different. I also know we all grow in time so I wish you luck

Awww we do kinda feel the same way....it sucks:(...not the poem but having those kindas of feelings...the poem was reallly really good5/5
auna

Wow- i liked the bit were you changed your mind and said she...

"no song can describe the pain i....she feels inside"

i dont think i have seen any one else do that before...good job

october xx

I think that this poem is very good. Keep up the good work. This poem is only to true in so many cases.

This poem is like a prayer full of love