Moment

by shay   Sep 12, 2006


A moment in time
is all we are given,
to make the best of it
is being hard driven,
the time and heart ache
we all went through,
to see a loved ones
life go blue,

a moment in time
is all that is needed,
to spend time with the
onse that lives were cheated,
dad left us all
so unexpexted,
it feels as though
we have all been rejected,

to lose someone
with a passion,
is more painful
than anyone could imagine,
hurt and pain
the sorrow and tears,
allows us all to
have more fears,

a moment is precious
anyone can see,
the death of a loved one
that breaks up a happy family.

(please comment on my poems it would the world to me and my family)
*shay*

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Shay, firstly i am really sorry for the demise of your father and wish you & your family all the best for future.

    Poem - I really liked the raw feelings that has been shared through lovely selection of words, very nicely written indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by angel of the night

    I have to agree with you i was very heart felt it almost made me cry