My promise

by Joe Eijyuu   Sep 12, 2006


Moon-rise in the day
Sunrise in the night
Those are the things
I can't promise you even if I so tried
But I'll promise you the dream of your love
Bigger than the moon and
More dazzling than the sunrise, my darling!

Shooting star in the day
Rainbow in the midnight
Those are the things
I can't give you even if I so wanted
But I'll pledge you the reams of real love
Lovelier than the shooting star and
More heartening than rainbow, my darling!

Snowflakes in summer's day
Cuckoo's song in winter's night
Those are the things
I can't bring you even if I so desired
But I'll bring you the cream of sweet love
Softer than snowflakes and
More romantic than cuckoo's song, my darling!

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  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Oh my gosh, this poem is amazing!! the simplicity of your true feelings shines through so well. awesome job!!!! :) keep up the great work!!
    ~maggie