Beautifully written my friend....I am sure that you will find that which you seek.

Beautifully written. To yearn, and to want, nay, need.. You have expressed it.. Well done. xx

Amazing...loved it!
This was very deep with such imagery that created an aura of sadness.
I enjoyesd the read so much I am going back to read it again! 5/5

Bravo, and applause.

I loved this, I really don't know how to explain but the word usage and overall creativity of it, hooked me from the first word to the last. Excellent write!

Wow! that really was a beautiful piece! i loved it. there is so many visual words that i could really see it! good job!Ãœ