by Dacey Flame Sep 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
"Have you heard? Shes gone!" |
by DragonGirl
Cool, i really respect your poem because it rhyems (thats hard!!) |
by tyanna
WOW!! I'm wondering if there are any poems of yours that doesn't deserve a 5/5...You're amazing!!! Great rhyme scheme too...don't see that often... |
by Jenni Marie
Awwwh, this was really sad, yet such pleasure to read. |
Wow, Just wow, so much emotion within. Great write! the flow and structure were excellent, however I do have one word of advice. Try not to use so many " " you just have way to many. Other than that wonderful job. |
by Allison
I liked the rhyme sceme: |