The Price

by Dacey Flame   Sep 12, 2006


"Have you heard? Shes gone!"
Suicides the price,
to finally get her classmates,
to talk about her nice.

"Pack her things up neat!"
Their driven by the money,
her parents sold her off,
Aren't their actions funny?

"No more watching that darkish girl!"
Shes restored her teacher's sanity.
Sit far back, don't say a word,
her gift to humanity.

"My beautiful girl is gone!"
Her loving boy is hurt.
He trys to keep a straight face,
as tears run down his shirt.

"I trusted you above everyone!"
Her best friend sobs at night.
Seeing her buddy covered in blood,
was just to much of a sight.

"I don't think I can go on!"
Her last words to us all.
But now if she were here she'd warn,
don't ever let your hopes fall.

"The world is an unfair place!"
It seems either way you loose,
stay alive or kill yourself,
which one will you choose?

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  • 17 years ago

    by DragonGirl

    Cool, i really respect your poem because it rhyems (thats hard!!)

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    WOW!! I'm wondering if there are any poems of yours that doesn't deserve a 5/5...You're amazing!!! Great rhyme scheme too...don't see that often...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, this was really sad, yet such pleasure to read.
    Again I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and wording, I thought the imagery you used was fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, Just wow, so much emotion within. Great write! the flow and structure were excellent, however I do have one word of advice. Try not to use so many " " you just have way to many. Other than that wonderful job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked the rhyme sceme:
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    It the one that I like use. The poem was really sweet and there was just something about it that spoke to me.*5/5*

    Alyson

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