Great poem. The rhyming was excellent the whole way through and the poem flowed very nicely. I love how the first line of every stanza was in quotations, that was a nice added touch to the poem and shows the uniqueness of your writing. I also love the last stanza. "stay alive or kill yourself, which one will you choose?. Wow, the questioning in those lines really brought the poem to the top. It got me thinking which is good.
You are a great writer and I can tell that just from reading this one poem. Keep it up!

&& check out my poems sometime, it would mean a lot.

Well that's life isn it? Only fair when we got what we want...
great poem btw keep writing!

I really like it =]

Thankz for participating in my contest!

Liked this one alot, great work keep it up

Strong.
Very strong poem that you have written here, filled with dark emotions.
Erm, I really liked the ending, great way to finish off the poem at whole.
You had a wonderful flow, great imagery, and excellent vocabulary!
Wonderful, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This was a good poem, but it confused me a little bit. Your wording was a little difficult on the eyes, but other than that it was good.

Another good poem, 5/5!!!

I liked the rhyme sceme:
A
B
C
B

It the one that I like use. The poem was really sweet and there was just something about it that spoke to me.*5/5*

Alyson

Wow, Just wow, so much emotion within. Great write! the flow and structure were excellent, however I do have one word of advice. Try not to use so many " " you just have way to many. Other than that wonderful job.

Peace, Joe

Awwwh, this was really sad, yet such pleasure to read.
Again I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and wording, I thought the imagery you used was fantastic.

WOW!! I'm wondering if there are any poems of yours that doesn't deserve a 5/5...You're amazing!!! Great rhyme scheme too...don't see that often...

Cool, i really respect your poem because it rhyems (thats hard!!)