Comments : How to take your last breath

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    SCARY! LOL! BUT VERY WELL WRiTTEN! i DiDN`T MEAN TO WRiTE KNOW ANYWHERE BUT ANYWAYS;; GOOD POEM AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENT!

    -SHELBY-

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex D

    Wow.. that was powerful, the wording was amazing, the flow was amazing, the phrasing was amazing and it MEANT something it was real thank you for writing something so amazing your going on my favorites 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wow i love this poem its amazing! =]!
    i love the kinda dark theme to it
    you are a great writer
    keep up the good work and stay strong
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxx