Lived And Died.

by Megann Lee   Sep 12, 2006


Every things fading upon this foggy night here.
The sounds are dulling, and the crickets chirps are growing.
Her breathing is slowing, tears are welling in her blue eyes.
Life has been lived to it's fullest, and now it's time to pass on by.

Her grip is tightening, the fear is building for time is almost stopped.
Stopped in it's tracks, time to let everything go quickly.
Don't have any fears, spread those wings you where given.
And take your destined flight, up high above the clouds.

When it's all said and done, nothing more to be spoken of.
She's gone, her smile lingering on her pale resting body.
Her white hair, and perfectly wrinkled skin and dulled blue eyes.
Tell the story of, the old lady who's now lived and died.

© Megan Wheeler 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Fabulous....the emotion is good even the flow well i rate this poem 5/5 coz it make me sad at the same time just keep it up!

    god bless...

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very great poem, full of real emotion and I really enjoyed it, 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Seronum

    Awesome Writing, Im going to read more of yours. 5 up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Every things fading upon this foggy night here.
    ((-Thing's-
    I really liked these lines...Very creative.))
    The sounds are dulling, and the crickets chirps are growing.
    ((-cricket's-))

    I liked this poem. It was very creative and the end was a shocker.. I really didn't see it coming. Also, it was beautifully written. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5