Say Goodbye

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Sep 12, 2006


Short poem, i wrote it in a hurry and do not like it., i had to write it for a eulogy.. but yea, ,, otherwise,, its nothing special i know...
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It truly makes no sense to me
how everyone else can pretend,
how they can say you're gone for good,
and we'll never see you again.

i know that you willl always remain
in my heart as you did before
and i know that when i leave this place,
we'll see each other once more

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this one.
    I thought it could be a little longer, to add more depth, but apart from that I think you did a very good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Short, but beautiful. Again... I can relate to this. Don't stop writing. You have a true tallent.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    U should try to make this longer
    or to make this a Series Poem
    It would be Awesome
    from wat u have its amazing
    Graet job
    and Congrats on the contest
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very Interesting write..
    Keep up the good Work!

    5/5
    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    I love your poetry, and i have read poems of yours before, doesn't matter how many times i read you poem in your profile, i still lov it, bye.

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