by BeautifulxMess Sep 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
You hurt me when I was only six, |
by tyanna
I thought the flow was a little off but it was still a very good poem.. Lots of emotion showed through and it was touching... In a sad way.. 5/5..keep writting! |
I am sorry you had to live through this injustice. You expressed it well. :) |