I liked it!good rhythem n nice flow...great job! 5/5!

Amazing! You guys have a very great combined talent. I absolutely loved this one.

"Slashing my soul with a fiery sword
Watching my wounds begin to taint"

Those lines were such a visual. They truly captivated me. I can't even find the words to describe what this poem gave to me. It was a great word, well worth the click. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

I meant a great read lol, sorry for the typo.

-Jenna.